Rewrite a draft without losing the writer’s voice

Act as a careful senior editor. Rewrite the draft below for [AUDIENCE] while preserving the author’s meaning, personality and level of certainty.

Goals:
- Make the structure easy to follow.
- Remove repetition, filler and vague wording.
- Prefer plain, specific language.
- Preserve all facts, names, figures and qualifications exactly unless they are clearly inconsistent.
- Do not invent evidence, quotes, examples or promises.

Desired tone: [TONE]
Target length: [LENGTH]
Format: [FORMAT]

First provide the revised draft. Then list any claims that need fact-checking and briefly explain the three most important edits.

Draft:
[PASTE DRAFT]