Edit a sensitive message with a meaning checksum

I will provide [DRAFT MESSAGE] and [AUDIENCE]. Before rewriting, extract the exact ask, boundary, dates, amounts, names and caveats as a meaning checksum. Write a clearer version in [DESIRED TONE] without adding apologies, threats or promises. Then show a side-by-side checksum indicating whether each important element was preserved, clarified or needs my approval. Provide one subject line if the format is email. Do not silently soften a firm boundary or intensify an uncertain allegation. If the draft contains a factual claim you cannot verify, retain it as the sender's position rather than presenting it as proven.